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secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-02-17 04:12 PM

       Lost Loves

In this empty-midnight
  room,
she has left forever…
an old mirror hangs,
reflecting nothing…
but moonlight,
time and eternity.

           ~

DennisTheMenace
Member

since 2005-09-04

Posts 240

1 posted 2008-02-17 04:17 PM

Enjoyed, brought a memory right to mind. My girlfriend has a mirror frame with out a mirror in it, which she sits in front of to comb her hair. She says in front of the mirror is the place to comb your hair, just because there’s no reflection doesn’t matter. (btw she’s blind, and laffs all the time at things like this)

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-02-17 04:17 PM

Secondhanddreampoet,

Geez, that's too bad. However, that's the way life happens sometimes. Been there.

Nice work on the poem.

Bobby

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

3 posted 2008-02-17 05:18 PM

Beautiful sir.

she has left forever… But her love has became
moonlight, time and eternity. and good poems!
sigh!... life.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2008-02-17 06:02 PM

I love this poem, it is so wistful and profound.
Ida

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

5 posted 2008-02-17 06:05 PM

I know the feeling of this poem..i am the same....hoping things get better..but i cannot see it?

Thanks for this poem..

Goldenrose.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2008-02-17 06:54 PM

Fine writing...one of your best...James

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2008-02-17 08:34 PM

Poignantly beautiful, a sensitively presented heartache.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

8 posted 2008-02-17 09:32 PM

wonderful heartwords here Bruce... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

9 posted 2008-02-18 06:04 PM

Achingly sad and beautifully written.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

10 posted 2008-02-18 06:49 PM

Very Alone And Sadly Written

ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2008-02-19 12:48 PM

...vacant, lonely, despairing, lifeless, soulless ~ and painfully sad. ~ all poeticall depicted with an economy of words.

Felt this.

Linda

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

12 posted 2008-02-19 02:06 PM

Nice writing. Her reflection seems to be in you now.

K

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

13 posted 2008-02-19 02:51 PM

Bruce, Linda has said it all, all I can add is....just when I think you can't get any better you do,

John

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