How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Sanctuary Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives

A home without a wall,
Our haven without ends,
A circle we all call
Our Family of Friends!

navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #42 » The Math of the After
Open Poetry #42
Post A Reply Post New Topic The Math of the After Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
DennisTheMenace
Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240
0 posted 2008-02-17 03:46 PM


I can count my blessings
And the biggest one would be you,
If all the others were missing
Just your love would do.

So I’ll walk a path well trodden
Not breaking out to the wide side,
Your opinion is not forgotten
So my actions I’ll not hide.

Count me as the straight walker
If the road to love lead to you,
I don’t need to be an impressive talker
Just your love will do.
© Copyright 2008 DennisTheMenace - All Rights Reserved
TomMark
Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133
LA,CA
1 posted 2008-02-17 05:31 PM

This is very good.  enjoyed.
DennisTheMenace
Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240
2 posted 2008-02-17 06:32 PM

Thanks Tom
Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
3 posted 2008-02-17 08:35 PM

Nice and sweet!
effjayel
Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
4 posted 2008-02-19 05:11 AM

Dennis, I like this.... a lot,   good job

John
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #42 » The Math of the After

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary