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The smile of you ... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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and let the sun shine bright and the rain fall down and the winds blow their gentle and the gentle be you and let the air take a breath and the sky blaze blue and the rivers flow their natural and the natural be you and let the days be full and the nights be long and the summers bring their smiles and the smiles be you for you are a light to behold... Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, dear Roniece, you created a masterpiece! I am listening to divine music right now and your words are the perfect accompaniment to its overwhelming beauty (prayers from lyrical Operas ... Haydn, Tschaikovsky, Donizetti ...). This is my absolute favorite of yours! Deeply captivating! love and hugs Margherita  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dear Margherita.. you always write such lovely comments to my work.. I'm very pleased you have enjoyed it... your choice of music sounds wonderful indeed ..enjoy! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
I have to echo Margherita(if she doesn't mind), if it's not the best thing you have written, its certainly up there. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Well how perfect is this poem? So much feeling, so much compassion, so much gentleness..thank you for giving this to us... Goldenrose. Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r & b, a pleasure to see the warm in this..listen to the warm..enjoyed |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
A pleasure to read RDB! I really enjoyed the piece you created  ARCTIC WIND |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
the gentle and natural delivered with light and smiles... who could ask for more?!... this is one of the best poems I have EVER read! very serious and long-sustained applause... [a 'poetic standing ovation' sent along for this grand-fine 'penning!'] |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear RDB, There is a very nice thought behind this poem. Try it without the "and"s starting the lines. I imagined it without them, and it works great. I gotta go get ready for Mass. Bobby |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awww Roniece! This is a greeting card in the making! beautiful one here! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you each of you for your generous, warm and wonderful comments.. ps: yo'Bobby, I knew you were going to suggest that - I was even smiling to myself as the words came out of my heart... now, RDB, you know Bobby's gonna pick you up on those 'ands'! thank you, I appreciate your comments greatly... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"for you are a light to behold... " ~ Indeed you are! 'and' m'dear, I always enjoy "the smile of you" when I see your photo! A delightful read from a delightful poetess ~ and person!  Love & hugs, Linda |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Lovely! It's one you cannot read without smiling! Thank you, lady RDB! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Lindalou... thank you, you always bring a smile to me... love RDBMidnight... thank you my friend... lovely to see your comments on my work .. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Roniece my dear I would like to echo all the other responses, it was great. A big hug Lindsay |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
and let the sun shine down on you! beautiful! Hugs, Robert |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Lindsay... you are too kind.. thank you x Robert... thank you, that was lovely.. x Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
I am sure that these words deeply moved the person they were written for. poetry podcasts, blogs and[ photopoems at URL= http://anthonyarmstrong.ca |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
" for you are a light to behold... " RDB, And your words are a joy to behold.... John |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
I posted this earlier, but it doesn't seem to have appeared. I just think these words must have deeply moved the person you wrote them for. poetry podcasts, blogs and[ photopoems at URL= http://anthonyarmstrong.ca |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Smiles are good, especially yours...I believe that smiles come from a happy heart...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Anthony...thank you so much! your generous words on my work have brightened my day! John... thank you too.. appreciate you reading my work always James... well you often smile me with your work! thank you ... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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