Open Poetry #42 |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
On 10-24-07 Walking along the road to understanding Denying and applying all that is seen …And unseen… Taking for granted floods of forever And fine time, and nowhere Seeking fresh foliage, a gleaming garden Exploiting what fertile soil is there Fogs of plunder stolen …so discreetly… Frigid winds and stormy sees Fluttering fantasies and waterfalls brilliant A self sufficient climate A friend to serenity Portrayal of the night sky Between the here and now Beyond what is lost …and found… Vines of contentment Wrapped in lies An empty land of despair …for time to hide… Sewing seeds of discord, change is nigh Descending from heaven’s gate Flowery fresh, a discontinuous song ...and on… |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your palette shows and conveys pretty much all the emotions a human heart can experience ... ON! Wonderful, captivating write, Kristabell! love Margherita |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Kristabell I read this 3 times & it just gets better, it's going in the library..... Thanks for sharing John |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Thank you both of you. This one was a fun one. K |
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