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Open Poetry #42

My Hero

JEZZ24
Junior Member

since 2008-01-10

Posts 11
UK

0 posted 2008-02-15 06:38 PM

What happened to my hero?
the one that stroked my hair
the one that pulled me from the dark and told me he'd be there

What happened to my hero?
the one that held my hand
the one that talked me through my woes and made me understand

What happended to my hero?
the one that held me tight
the one that made me strong enough to believe with all my might

What happened to my hero?
the one that healed my pain
the one that kissed my tears away and dusted off the shame

What happened to my hero?
For my hero's gone away
I last looked deep in to his eyes that cold December day.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2008-02-15 07:07 PM

Jezz~
This is sad, but so lovingly done~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-02-15 08:33 PM

JEZZ24,

This poem is well put together. Very good work.

Bobby

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2008-02-16 11:47 AM

I took and looked beyond your hero,
to all of those we proclaim as heroes...

and there do not seem to be any future ones
near my vision at the moment.

This was well done, Jezz...thank you so much for sharing this one.

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

4 posted 2008-02-16 12:59 PM

Very well written..

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