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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india 
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Parallel Every parallel line meets at the eternity. Their figures rise from the fog, From the end of the lines, From the point of return to difference. They are conversing in a deep loquacity A dry spray of dust in the air. The infinite rolls of rails are mourning. They wait to end their talk and depart To oblivion. The talk lingers like the patient cat In search of its home-alley. The friends do not know any home! Home, abode, asylum…. Sky begins to drop, Softly and pliant like an inducing death. The take The easy shelter of philosophical talks. And, of course they beg to differ. From the distance They may look the meeting point. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 I love this! very cool write! |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Dear Pod In the beginning it persisted After a while it disappeared Or did it? As far as the eye can see As long as the mind can recall Infinity existed If it was ever there at all..... Nice.. John |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
very very beautiful. I love to read how you view the world, how the the thought was working and how the soul was ending. Very good. I do wish that this could be longer. very much enjoyed the read, my dear friend.  |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
"from the distance" . . . an eloquent reminder that a closer look is required. Well written and thought provoking! Robert |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
thank you all |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
My absolute favorite of yours til now, dear Poddar!!! A keeper. The vision, the thoughts, the emotion, everything flows in total harmony. Really great poetry! love Margherita |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, forgot to click "add thread to library ..."  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
... There, I saved it before I forgot to! Dear pod, yours is a fascinating, philosophical ~ and poetic!~ mind. I would like to echo every word that Margherita wrote in her reply! ~ plus every other complimentary response by all of the other readers! Very well done!  Loving hug ~ and a pat on the back!!! EA |
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