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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
she was a forest fire of a woman kindling, crackling devouring twigs of broken promises and leafy skeletons of autumns past she was a forest fire of a woman raging, swirling engulfing trunks of charred intentions and long-fingered branches of desire she was a forest fire of a woman panting, pressing smoldering waiting for the smoke to clear so from the ashes, she could be reborn. |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
And so began the rise of the Phoenix....Good write & much enjoyed here. John |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
We all need to re-invent ourselves from time to time. *grin* Thanks, John for your kind comments. Indigo |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
beautiful!!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Passionate and captivating. love Margherita  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Compelling pictures...your words brought verse to life. |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Tom- Many thanks for your triple !!! Margherita - Glad you could feel the flames. Diamond - Your words are warming indeed. Thanks! Indigo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the rise from ashes the gift of a new season nice mood here |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
I.G. You smell spring in the air too, eh? Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indigo...I would imagine if she were to crash into the ocean...there would be something steamy evolving? enjoyed this lady...have missed your pen ms |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so nice to read you again... I love "the forest fire of a woman" M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow this is awesome! |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
this is a forest fire of a poem moving, touching inspiring Robert |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
DS - Bubble, bubble, toil and trouble. Mmm, yes. A cauldron of steamy goodness. Nakedthoughts - Thanks for the welcome back and enjoying the read! Shadows - I appreciate your kind words. Robert - Where there's smoke, there's fire. Glad the words singed just a bit. Indigo |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I like this a lot. Read it yesterday and have been back three times. You got it right with this poem. Alison |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Alison- Am happy to know this resonates for you. Many thanks for letting me know. Indigo |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I don't know how I missed this but i really like it. Ida |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Lovely, I Found very wonderful to read ARCTIC WIND |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
M.M.- So glad you passed through my forest... Arctic- Your cool breezes are welcomed any time. Indigo |
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