Open Poetry #42 |
Morning Song (lyrics) |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Iam mood to sing a song, Early morning rain makes me feel like Iam in heaven Knowing you, Loving words, Whispering into my ears, Laughing voice, Through the heart beat Early morning rain, Let you hold me, Don't let it go, Take my soul Take my heart, Take me to the highest mountain I want to climb and shout I love you The echoes I hear through the woods Far from the places I go, Knowing the years soon holds my breath away, Waking sun, Morning sun That is what I need to look upon them Let the past leave the pain behind Morning song That is all I want to hear |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Very beautiful, dear vandana! I love the image of shouting from the top of the mountains your love. love Margherita |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Vandana, I like this a great deal. I especially like the idea of: "Far from the places I go," Sometimes I wish for that. Not often though. Bobby |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
If human darkens our life, Sun and songs always bright it. enjoyed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDanaDear~ It is always good to see you visit with us~ I love the morning ... and your song of love is refreshing~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
a very beautiful morning song Vandana! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I loved the first line... I am mood to sing a song... all I saw was a smiling face. Enjoyed this very much, Vandana. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Let the past leave the pain behind Morning song That is all I want to hear sounds wonderful to me M |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Now I smile, vandana, because I really like your song. |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
this poem is timelessly simple and hence live long in my memory. |
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