navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #42 » Certain Terms
Open Poetry #42
Post A Reply Post New Topic Certain Terms Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Dr.Moose1
Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2008-02-12 02:12 PM


Certain terms throwing sparks
cause a flame to ignite
in the brush of a poetic day,

where the tinder has lain
drying out for some time
lacking something of worth one might say.

That these hands fan the fire
is as much a surprise
to the author as one who might read,

for there've been many ways
of expression I've tried
might there yet be a way to succeed?

We've all doubts which can dampen
the brightest of days and send what
we'd relate up in smoke,

nagging fears that perhaps
we've divulged a bit much
and become part of somebodys' joke,

but, the fire is real
and it burns with a heat
known to all who have looked at their art

and said this is the manner
I choose to reveal
what it is that I store in my heart.


© Copyright 2008 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2008-02-12 03:43 PM


The soul of a poet is a fragile thing....
I so understand and appreciate this poem.
I think most poets feel exactly the same way. It's hard to put yourself out there sometimes but I wouldn't worry if I were you, your writing is superb.
                               Ida

effjayel
Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
2 posted 2008-02-12 04:02 PM


Dr M...first 2 don't matter? Very true, on the 3rd point may I please say;  A resounding YES! The reason to continue can be found in your post above. It worked for me on so many levels, I love it, long may you continue to contribute  for the collective enjoyment of like minded souls within these pages of blue....

Thank You for posting this I'm keeping it in my private Library.

John

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2008-02-12 06:41 PM


Did you just write the eulogy for my pen name?

*shaking my head*

You always make me smile.

TomMark
Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133
LA,CA
4 posted 2008-02-12 08:14 PM


Played the string of my heart.

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #42 » Certain Terms

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary