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Open Poetry #42

A letter to the father

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

0 posted 2008-02-11 11:15 PM

Dear GOD,
Why was my life chosen to be messed up? I Don't deserve this life,I try to do things right. I can't be perfect you know. Just because I messed up one time means I have a crappy life? Did you plan to pick off my biggest hero? Or did your finger slip? Do you not want me to find love? If so why me ...I'm regular I deserve the feeling of being loved too. Did i mess up that bad did I? Just take me now save me the time, the emotions,the pain. If this was all my fault I can understand. But why choose one teenager in a small town with his own emotional problems...Well I guess I
Should go now , I'm going to finish the suffering now.

P.S. There are more of us that Believe...

~-Keagan-~

Bobby Jordan
Member

since 2007-08-13

Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-02-11 11:40 PM

Yo Gabriel,

Is Cornfields anywhere near Peoria, or is it closer to Normal? Nice work on your poem, I like it.

Bobby

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

2 posted 2008-02-12 01:20 AM

gabriel ypur pen is yielding enough.

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