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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-07-07 08:30 PM


     New Dreams of Love

Beneath a pure–cold, vaulted
sky of boundless beauty,
with scattering clouds
and sparkling constellations
dancing in the treetops,
I invite a soft-twilight evening
  wind
to sweep old memories and
  shadows
from this moonlit forest
  and my mind,
(on such a lovely Summer night)
so they may fill with fine new
dreams of love…awaiting sunrise.

           ---b. e. adams  (7/7/08)

© Copyright 2008 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-07-07 08:35 PM


"sparkling constellations
dancing in the treetops"
What a beautiful, romantic night sky!

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2 posted 2008-07-07 08:39 PM




perfect!

2islander2
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3 posted 2008-07-08 02:40 AM


delicious the association of the wind with the sweep of the thoughts...

enjoyed it.

   yann

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4 posted 2008-07-08 04:22 AM


You write such beautiful poetry, Bruce. It's always nice to hear your positive side.
It sparkles with with your special magick.
                                 Ida

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5 posted 2008-07-08 05:37 AM


quote:
so they may fill with fine new
dreams of love…awaiting sunrise.



This seems a very good idea to me, dear Bruce. And you said it with your usual mastery.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2008-07-09 05:33 AM


A pleasure to read...James
XGarapanX
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7 posted 2008-07-09 09:09 PM


This was the part I was waiting for...
quote:
I invite a soft-twilight evening
  wind
to sweep old memories and
  shadows
from this moonlit forest
  and my mind,

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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