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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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adagio splinterfiftying frozen sandstones shimmering in ovens of maybe-so jelly pas de deux would you wear slow motion on the tides of my eyes beside our rincon kind of love terpsichore is it a color of indigo or a flavor of undulation does the mouth care really opus once it is born can you just send it back and erase the moaning music that was its birth and call it only a dance _________________ daark |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
silently saves it |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks babe |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A dance is a dance is a dance ... Fabulous read. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks so much lady |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I read this before and didn't comment on it because it was almost too rich to digest at first. The second setting made comfortable room for a lavish meal like this. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Friend garapan. You smile me with your gracious comments. |
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