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walker's valley south |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it was always easier to love your trees when they stood up in the desert and gave one promises of more than just the casual sand shapes although they were all as willing women more often than nothing else but they were just something for the sky to rub her itching belly on when feeding on the leather side of manskins that didn't fill her hunger but only soothed her throat after the lifetimes of moaning pretending she was the stranger's wind _______________ daark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You do come up with the most captivating visual imagery, dear D.! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, humble thanks lady friend |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D I dunno, I just felt like I was transported some place with this one. I liked it and wondered where I was going. But, I didn't really need to know. A |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
"pretending she was the stranger's wind" my first smile of the morning.. see what happens when I read you??  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..it is a mountain place I enjoy, thanks for going along little one _______________ ms gs, thanks for smiling donna..it is a pleasure to smile you |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
"but they were just something for the sky to rub her itching belly on" Wow - I love that...... very smart! |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Atomic geniusnessity. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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