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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2008-07-03 05:39 PM


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Beside a road
Where I was feeling
More than a little sad
A woodchuck popped up
And quietly said
Hey Senior
What about those Cubs

What
I replied
So thoroughly surprised
To which that groundhog responded
Oh please forgive me
I apologize

My English
Isn’t all that good


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1 posted 2008-07-03 07:08 PM



Marchmadness
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2 posted 2008-07-03 09:05 PM


Love a sense of humor, John. This is great.
                              Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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3 posted 2008-07-03 09:15 PM


Yo John,

Listen to that woodchuck, he's on the ball, and so are the cubs.  He might have a hot tip for you.  Does he play the horses?

It's great to see the cubs doing good.

Bobby

XGarapanX
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4 posted 2008-07-03 10:27 PM


Hilarious!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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