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balanced love or jealousy
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balanced love or jealousy |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Sometimes when two roses fall in love, one of them loves more that the other one. When the other one weighs up it she fades sometimes and abandons its perfumes at random of the breeze. The wind then takes their love away… Can be she would have better made consider that she was jealous. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Yann, jealousy is most certainly the first cause of an unbalanced love and the risk of rupture. This soft nudge beautifully rendered will speak to many, no doubt! Love, Margherita  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I have never understood jealousy, it is not really a part of my personality but I have witnessed the unbelieveable chaos it can cause for those who give in to such an ugly emotion or to those who make the mistake of being flattered by it. A subject worth exploring, yann. Ida |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Margherita for your kind and wise poem... yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank You Ida, when I was young I was stupidly jealous and didn't control it...I think there is nothing more stupid and naughty that jealousy, It's a big lack of respect and faithfulness... thanks yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hard to accept, appreciate, forgive and love when allowing jealousy, controlling and manipulating a place in a relationship...James |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Yann, you describe a sad situation which probably happens more often than both parties loving each other equally, and you display magnificently deep philosophical wisdom at a possible solution. Jealousy is such a damaging emotion, and can even kill. Some people, as Ida said, are flattered by it - and that, in my opinion is sick - worse still, some people try to make others jealous with all the intent in the world. Jealousy is an extremely interesting and complex subject and a whole set of encyclopaedias could be written on it. - Owl |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you dear Owl for your comphrehensive and sharing comment...I really agree with what you say... yann |
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