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DennisTheMenace
Member

since 2005-09-04

Posts 240

0 posted 2008-02-10 04:06 PM

There’s so much that I would do,
Exciting places we could both go,
Extra time I could spend with you
If only the wishing made it so.

I’d not have to going to school
Without study I would simple know
And the scholars would be the fools
If only the wishing made it so.

I’d rid the world of every blight
There’d be no depressing low
No one would live in endless night
If only the wishing made it so.

We’d watch the clouds and sun
Watch the forest gently fill with snow
Sit a watch as a spider’s web is spun
If only the wishing made it so.

But mostly I’d wish for more time
To be with you and make love grow,
I’d find the perfect words and rhyme
If only the wishing made it so.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2008-02-10 04:37 PM

Very Much Enjoyed Dennis the menace!

If I could wish for stuff, I would wish for world peace and lots of money lol

Everyone loves money, A lot

most of all, To cure global warming if that would ever happen, or at least stop it from coming!

because that isn't puppies and candies!

ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2008-02-10 04:55 PM

Nice thoughts...nothing wrong with wishing, when used in combination with clear thoughts and wise choices and appropriate actions...I would do a lot more traveling if all of my wishes came true...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2008-02-11 09:33 AM

very nice!

love the ryhme scheme and thoughts in this!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2008-02-11 10:23 AM

I will grant you three wishes. Use them wisely.
To make them stretch into more, I suggest that you use each one for requesting 3 more wishes!

You might be able to save the world with that many! ~ and still be able to spend more time with the love of your life!

So mote it be!

Earth Angel

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

5 posted 2008-02-11 11:26 AM

I hope you get your wishes. Much enjoyed.

Bobby Jordan
Member

since 2007-08-13

Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

6 posted 2008-02-11 02:31 PM

DennisTheMenace,

There is a good rhyme scheme in this poem. Keep writing like that.

Bobby

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