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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2008-06-29 09:28 PM


Thursday night is party night
at Angelo’s house.  

There’s no use trying to sleep.  

All of Sally and Felix’s friends
like Marika, Muck, Butch,
and Wawa are over.  

Wawa’s brought
his pit bull along too.  

Everybody’s all drunked-up,
and there’s nothing
the pit bull can do
but lay there and growl.  

Everyone tends to leave
the dog alone.  

The place is a mad house,
everyone running
in and out the door.  

Felix is in the front room
waving his gun around,
and screaming crazy.  

Muck and Marika
are in the kitchen,
fighting it out.  

Angelo is sitting outside,
leaning up against the house,
well away from the stoop.

He doesn’t want
to get trampled
with people
running in and
out the door.

He's thinking.  

It’s a hot August night,
not a good night
for sleeping anyway.    

Bobby

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XGarapanX
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1 posted 2008-06-29 09:54 PM


Angelo needs to tackle Felix and pistol whip him with his own gun for running around all partied up and waving a firearm, lol! Enjoyed again!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-06-30 09:41 AM


Now XGarapanX,

You know Angelo would never do anything to disrespect his daddy.

Bobby

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3 posted 2008-07-04 03:24 AM


Maybe Angelo knew that this night was not about him at all - and the best thing to do was to just become invisible.  That is what I would have done anyway.

Alison

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2008-07-04 04:19 PM


Thanks dear Alison,

Yes, Angelo wisely decided to disappear for the night.  He's waiting outside until everything's quiet.  Then he'll sneak in and eat some leftovers.

Love Bobby

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2008-07-05 02:23 PM


Enjoyed...James
Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-07-05 06:17 PM


Thanks James,

I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem.

Bobby

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