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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I often wondered about that salad and your elbows on the table being nonchalant and playful like I was really your food and the green things were mementos that you toyed with intending to keep my attention elsewhere from where you knew it was already deserting the main course for something more final that would be my just desserts and you would be pleased to offer something sinful for a topping ___________ daark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The great thing about salads is they are so tastey and can be offered up in so many different ways dontcha think? Enjoyed it D. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And you did this with a salad, you know it is amazing how you build your poems into delicious dishes of beauty and enchantment. Salad is kind of slow food, therefore you have all the time to dream of the perfect dessert, which does not necessarily need to be consumed on the spot....  love Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Poem dark Stranger!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks babe __________ ms mar, thank you for slipping in _____________ aw, thank you for joining in this one |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
napkins serve little to hide the blush of hunger's forceful appetite. Fine dining takes on new meaning... Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi...your reply was a appetizing image to for sure, thank you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
smiling at the nonchalance of a spirited moment... and grinning. Widely.  |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
crossed out from the menu long ago. |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Daark, Great little ditty. Why noy? Bobby |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I do so love a good buffet! A |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
actually this poem needs a good publication and a successful print. good one. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
mmmm... you make me hungry for desserts Mr Daark! love RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thank you for dining close by ms ___________ tommark, thanks guy for the touch here ____________ bobby j, thank you sir _______________ ms ali-san, thank you little one for the eyes ______________ poddarku, thank you friend for your comments ___________ ms r & b, would be a pleasure to provide something decadent I suspect. thanks ms |
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