Open Poetry #42 |
My Heart Sutra (Conclusion) |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
So we meet...realized in form - and surrendered at once as emptiness. With no becoming we are free to exist within one another. With no where to leave off we mingle intimate at fingertips - Space meeting itself as form in a play of pure delight. And in this moment we simply are - Form, Emptiness, And something more entirely our own. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
intimate at fingertips -I love your fingertips |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
..."and something more entirely, our own" Bravo!! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
And in this moment we simply are - Form, Emptiness, And something more Oh this is the perfect ending~ What a sweet treat your series is. Thank you for sharing the tender caress of your thoughts. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, this one makes perfect sense and how well you've written it. All three were a treat! Helen |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
This has been crazy good, as is your writing. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Your thoughts are extremely captivating, dear Eric! I enjoyed your series deeply. This moment holds us as one and I feel it. Margherita |
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