Open Poetry #42 |
The Last Grain |
SilhouetteMarquis Junior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 32 |
Time is slowly slipping from our translucent hourglass. And every single grain of sand is a second from our past. We wait in endless, joyful hope that our time was spent on love A fragile mass, the Nephillim The fallen, dammed, the dove. Our intentions may be jolly The morales may be fair Hath greed is heavy, as is lust But love is truly rare. A shredder of emotions, quick! A crimson trickle of a fool. My lifeforce hit, but I to care? For being such a sorrowed tool. Now emitting silence, left alone The crimson turns to blue The bottom of the looking glass A vision born, anew. So when you fall asleep tonight Conjure an answer true: How many grains of sand did I now waste away with you? |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
How many grains of sand did I now waste away with you?~ WOW, loved this poem. The beginning really captured me, and the ending was very good too.. Love it! Krysti |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Deep thoughts, SM. Enjoyed. Ida |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
This is brilliant, I look forward to seeing more of your work on here...... John |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed this.... ARCTIC WIND |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow that last line really grabs a person! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic writing...James |
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