just the sweetest side of me

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2008-06-28 05:35 AM

Oh I'm snappling so bad

like I am a fierce horse glad

fighting bit and bridle

I'd

stomp a cloud of dust

to buck:

as if I had a program I

had strapped upon my back.

Tell me, were decisions made?

Was I blind to judge decree?

I thought I was just having fun

and now,and now

you're telling me

that all that nodding was concede--

condescension

conning me?

Watch me take the tall high fence,

I have worked my flanks and this

is just the sweetest side of me

smiling...vertically.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2008-06-28 08:43 AM

~grin...
Sweetest side, no matter witch way you are facing

Always enjoy your clever wit!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2008-06-28 08:51 AM

give it to 'em.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2008-06-28 09:12 AM

I am sure you know that I love this, you magnificent, hot-blooded, chestnut, rodeo horse you!

How dare "they" call your agreeing, condescencion!

I understand the humorous sarcasm of "the sweetest side of you", but I think it was actually very sweet of you to write this gorgeous poem rather than bite "their" head/s off!

- Owl

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2008-06-29 01:04 AM

Karen... you go girl!!

loved this! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2008-06-29 08:16 PM

I just came back to *chuckle*

and

And ooh, just wait--the hubby gets to see me without hormones this fall!

Or not.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2008-06-29 10:16 PM

I had a Chuckle here myself!

I do really enjoy this Serenity!

Another beauty

ARCTIC WIND

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

7 posted 2008-06-30 12:44 PM

"smiling...vertically."

Babe!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2008-07-02 09:43 PM

I read this when you first posted it...

I couldn't stop chuckling...

and then busy kept me away for a day or two [or more]
so here I am
bringing up the gold!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

9 posted 2008-07-02 10:23 PM

"Thank you all very much for reading!"

*chuckle*

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

10 posted 2008-07-03 04:22 PM

Oh, lovely! Thanks.

- Owl

Spuddette
Member

since 2008-07-03

Posts 112
England

11 posted 2008-07-03 04:43 PM

ooh I like your style its very firey. Makes me want to go for a gallop!!!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2008-07-03 04:55 PM

good read

FastForward
Member

since 2008-06-29

Posts 66

13 posted 2008-07-03 05:45 PM

This is such a fiesty write! Good!

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