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Open Poetry #42
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ILoveTheRain
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since 2008-03-02
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0 posted 2008-06-27 04:59 PM

I can't think of much, but I gave it a try.


Shimmering, crystal clear water dripping
From the stainless steel faucet
Flowing through a creek, pond, or ocean
To always be in elegant motion

Surrounding the clouds on a sunny day
Meeting the ocean as one
Birds flying in groups across the sky, numbers unknown
Behind trails of smoke where airplanes have flown
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Topheth
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since 2001-09-08
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1 posted 2008-06-27 07:38 PM

Nice music to this... enjoyed.
XGarapanX
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2 posted 2008-06-29 12:06 PM

This was actually very yummy.

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ILoveTheRain
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since 2008-03-02
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3 posted 2010-07-31 11:20 PM

I just went back and read this.. I wrote it about 2 years ago, and I am so amazed that I wrote it. I just love the second stanza.
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