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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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The "wanting"-- lust is not enough there must be a haunting chill an obsession birthed to burst to dig deeper and be still. Discipline of follicles and the summoning at will to be silenced with a *snap* snap it is exactly that for that is what I do. Where science meets religion's awe quantum ben mechanical an expert in implosions, called, like an exorcist. Knowledge is the very test to put your questionings at rest-- a doctor and a damned priestess in state of sacred trust... There are rules. We follow them. Orders without questioning-- The place of mercy if, at all-- it is beyond rhetorical philosophy of sin. Something happened to us, love. "Here" I'm tapping on your skull. I am the sword. I am the dove. And trust is not a word I trust. give your all to me bequeath'd and I'll perform a surgery as havoc rules recovery: I'll be here for you -- believe and watch and feel it all reversed... insignificance a curse? Or birth re-realized. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DearLady~ You may not have meant it to be ... but yet it is ... mine~ 'Something happened to us, love. "Here" I'm tapping on your skull. I am the sword. I am the dove. And trust is not a word I trust. give your all to me bequeath'd and I'll perform a surgery as havoc rules recovery: I'll be here for you -- believe and watch and feel it all reversed... insignificance a curse? Or birth re-realized.' *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh Marge-- smiling through tears you are so lovely... I humbly thank you.  shaking my head I wondered if anyone would understand this-- I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN. I love you. heal....and yes, HUGLETS |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"And trust is not a word I trust." sometimes, we just don't get to choose. havoc...is when the doctors make you cry.. be well. both of you.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Suze? A wink will do.  They ain't all bad. But most of 'em need a spanking!  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Amazing. Love, Margherita |
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SkaaDee Member
since 2008-04-07
Posts 116Canada |
nice poem serenity |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
you never ever cease to amaze me, this is yet another wonderful write! Sheli It's psychosomatic. You need a lobotomy. I'll get a saw |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I think this touches many of us, Karen, in more ways than one. Ida |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Serenity, You are an incredible poet to be able to express this complexity with such momentum and thrust. Each word and line are chosen and placed with such exactness that the phonemes and meaning plunge together to produce clarity and strength in personal comprehension. (Gee, I wish I could say how your poetry affects me... I am just in awe of your skill and deep thinking. You seem to think in multi-layers of sound, context, and creativity.) hugs, miscellanea |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Did I say this is a Keeper? Click! I love your poetry! misce |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Serenity blaze, Your: “Where science meets religion's awe quantum ben mechanical an expert in implosions, called, like an exorcist.” brought to mind special weapons. Nice work. Bobby |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Crazy insane poetry. "Where science meets religion's awe quantum ben mechanical an expert in implosions, called, like an exorcist." This has to scare people. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"This has to scare people." Well. I always did say reading my poetry was like seeing me nekkid.  <--laughin' like Eddie MurphyThanks all for reading! lovin' hugs and smoochies! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Well... I always thought science was just religion without the fear of anybody's god.  |
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