Open Poetry #42 |
the mountains of Iran |
2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
The mountains of Iran, we cross them with eyes. Feet they bark as dogs to frighten the snow. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Incredible. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
very clever...appreciated from this soldier... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Garapan and Marcel for your kind comments. yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very clever, yann. I would almost think you were there. Ida |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank You Ida for your kind comment,It's always a pleasure reading you.... have a nice day yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Minimalism at its best, dear Yann! Love, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you dear Margherita for your kind comment, I enjoy very much minimalist poem ...Those of Huan Yi are stupendous... yann |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
it's short but triggers thought. personification at its best |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Brilliant ~ Enjoyed~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Kaile, thank you Romantic Heart for your kind comments yann |
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