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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
words filled with ambiguity piercing the soul with bitter regret dividing asunder, parting the ways chasing hope from the present scene leaving the residue of remembrance like dregs in a cup of tea deciphering, deciding, deliberating washing ashore the silt of supposition we leave our hearts as heaps stuttering at the podium of pedantics clarity escaping like steam from a boiling pot a boiling point of divide, scattering thoughts we leave them wafting through the air settling like sun-lit dust on the window pane of faith |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
It's obvious to me that you are a very intelligent poet. I especially appreciate the alliteration and the word combinations used. Awesome! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Garapan, Should I adopt you or simply give you a place on my court? Thanks for the flattering comment. I humbly accept your overly kind remarks. |
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