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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2008-02-09 05:05 PM

Wynter's Storm

Emotions tell me to just give up.
It's hard to hold back tears.
Each day becomes a force' gainst will,
tired of the now wasted years.

Not happy with the words be shared,
some meanness eroding the mood.
No matter how hard the trying is,
life's plans become subdued.

Pretending for others that all is well
when truth is held inside.
Exploding when the day is done,
when this heart lays in divide.

Another year has passed without,
aloneness becoming the norm.
Forever seems a long, long time
to wait out this Wynter's storm.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

1 posted 2008-02-09 05:08 PM

sad,sad,lonely, I read them into my bone.

beautiful but very sad.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2008-02-09 05:18 PM

Sorry Tom, but life keeps building walls for me right now, when I was almost free of them. Thanks for reading

M

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-02-09 05:18 PM

Dear Maureen, this hurts very much, may your storm be tamed by the touch of warm heart light.

Your write is powerful.

love and hugs
Margherita

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

4 posted 2008-02-09 05:27 PM

I can well relate to your words, Maureen, but just maybe forever can be as long as we decide it should be. If forever was only a day the storm would already be over. The snow might stay around for a bit but it's just to let us know where we've come from.

Wishing you sunny days after the storm.

Helen

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2008-02-09 06:20 PM

Sadly, I can truly relate (especially) to the first four
lines in this effectively emotive 'write!'...

you are most assuredly not 'alone' in these feelings,
Ms. M.!

[Unfortunately, I believe that an ever increasing
  number of us have found ourselves thrust into
  similar circumstances mid this "Runaway
  American Dream"]

Like Chekov's Winter...it seems perpetual...

applause for this 'penning!'

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