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You Can't Have That - Ode to a Tomato
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You Can't Have That - Ode to a Tomato |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I’m craving tomatoes lately Because they cause salmonella Maybe that’s also the reason I wanna hug on someone’s fella We only want what we can’t have Is this a modern human trait? Do we not desire something Until we know it’s too late? This shows a certain leaning To enjoy our own frustration Looking back on life’s path And feeling dissatisfaction Why can’t I want a tomato When it’s safe for me to eat Would that remove the danger Of wanting a forbidden treat? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Nice to read you in this thought provoking significant write! The desire for forbidden things must be in-built ever since humans appeared on this planet. We always want what we can't have, it's a risky business too. On the other hand it's a characteristic that induces us to dare, which under certain circumstances can mean survival. I enjoyed your ode to a tomato! Love, Margherita |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I think... no. It would just make you want more carrots instead. Brussel sprouts are tempting, too. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL at Garapan's reply. Oh, it's good to see your name here! Your tomato ode is sweet and tasty! I want full-power cheese, but must stick to fat-free or soy cheese to keep "C" under control. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Stay away from Sam Anella I hear he is a pain Forbidden fruit is sweeter So is drinking stolen rain Your poem was sweet and juicy Like a rich full bodied wine But then just like the ‘maters You both flourish on deVine Yes, we can’t have our pomme d'amours for a while, but we can still have a B.L. just hold the, T Speaking of tomatoes, your lovely poem Dear poet, was written with, aplomb. Or was that a Roma? San Marzano? Great Job! Rich |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, I love the play double meaning in your thoughts here Sharon! Really well done!  Much enjoyed your forbidden wants!  Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you for your kind replies..and glad I could inspire such 'punny' stuff! LOL |
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RC Langill Member
since 2008-03-09
Posts 104 |
Nothing gets attention as quickly as someone yelling "NO!" But hearing it, the first notion is often "Hey, I hadn't thought of that." Well written and a lot of fun. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Before I read ANY of the replies, please know I'm smiling widely, and wildly... just thing, m'friend, that tomatoes were once known as the "poison fruit"...[yea, I know you know I know...] so aren't we glad for salsa???  Loved it! P.S. I'll be giving a CLASS in October on "punny" poetry...may I enlighten them with yours? |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Hello, Sharon. Don't think I've introduced myself before. Indeed, I just binged on a tray of brownies. It made me sick for a while, but fun. Jaime |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Nodding an emphatic YES. With me? It's beefsteak! *helpless shrug* and  It's really good to read your humor again m'friend.  |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great Post Sharon, I liked the style. much enjoyed, a big hug. Lindsay |
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