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Open Poetry #42

L.A. (Los Angeles)

MarkG
Junior Member

since 2007-06-21

Posts 48
California USA

0 posted 2008-06-16 05:16 PM

L.A. (Los Angeles)

straight tequila shots
mez-cal highs
all-night lows
short skirts waiting across the bar
dark lipstick schemes
willing to go as far

L.A. high-life
hollywood hills
convertible chevrolets
fast lives on seacliff drive
summer blondes on beaches lay

heroin addict dreams
foolish city lights
searching spotlight beams
inner-city gangs
faithful choir sings
just another sunny day
living in L.A.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-06-16 07:28 PM

Yo MarkG,

This is a fine tribute to the town. Everyone should love where they live.

Bobby

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2008-06-17 07:05 PM

Nice...James

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

3 posted 2008-06-17 11:36 PM

living most of my life in L.A., I could definitely appreciate this piece.

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