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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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the eyes pierce from one cookie-cut to another.... seeing unheard anger conversed in Cigarette in midnight punctuations of commas and ampersands neon-like "done-me-wrong"s and "you ain't worth a damn"s a voyeur's dream... a rent's worth of reality television the new cigarette tax of increased gossip the solar system of cellphone aloneness... fight your private battles on your Mcdonalds deck, but don't cry if the channel is changed. |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Brian Sites, The idea for this is good. The channel's always going to get changed--it's just a matter of time. Bobby |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"in midnight punctuations of commas and ampersands" Oh, this is brilliant and refreshing! You stay away too long, Bri  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: You've been missed. By many. Welcome home!  " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Excellent write! My pleasure to read you. TD |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"in midnight punctuations of commas and ampersands" Awesome lines, Bri... So glad I came across this tonight... I've missed reading you... "When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace." --Jimi Hendrix |
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