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abraham's haunting |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I always promised the concrete madonna and the mistress of asphalt easy that my mind would not run again to the prison side of dust lovely they knew I was sensitive to tall tree women and the barefoot seduction of afternoons when one would call me romantic and not say the rest of her mind lest I would offer her my shirt soul and ask that she only wear it when I was her favorite tattoo from dusk til the dawn time mornings and maybe even the eden evenings before I bought some of her sleepings and painted other faces on them then left them under her pillow so I could always hear her dream them ______________ daark |
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leoni_v Member
since 2008-05-28
Posts 54Mpumalanga, South Africa |
I like this very much! I'll have to read it a few times to catch all the nuances  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks my friend.. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Darkest Stranger, Maybe if one puts all the tattoos together, they become a map to his heart. It could be a cryptic message of longing. Or is song could simply melt the hearts of all who listen. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..or it could just be windows on buildings going by as I sit still on a highway, thanks ms |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I guess it is whereever one's imagination takes them maybe. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
they knew I was sensitive to tall tree women and the barefoot seduction of afternoons when one would call me romantic and not say the rest of her mind mmmm..... Mr Daark... you and romantic go well together love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b, thanks so much lady from down under |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: True freedom is when we need not to promise anything ... Enticing in its whole, title comprised. Wish you a great Sunday, POET. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady of smiles, you bless me, YOU TOO!! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I Enjoyed this One Dark Stranger! ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
a&w, thanks to you |
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