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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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0 posted 2008-02-08 11:06 PM

You see I don't write about you anymore.
I've nothing in my heart for you.
And I'm not quite sure of where
whatever was there went off to.

It just takes all I've got these days
just to get by and throw in a smile,
and the more I have other goings-on
the longer and longer becomes the "while".

And I haven't loved you in quite a while.

Some become strangers. Some drift apart.
Some grow old and don't have the energy
for thinking much about a once love gone
or to keep playing sad songs on a burnt CD

tossed out the window
crossed the inuendo
and the last burned bridge.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2008-02-09 06:43 AM

..."tossed out the window
crossed the inuendo
and the last burned bridge."

Summed up and succinct.
Change and healing.

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

2 posted 2008-02-09 06:44 AM

Dear Dixie, he must have broken your heart my dear friend and today you write about him again. Enjoyed the read my friend, thanks for sharing. Keep throwing in that smile Dixie, makes all the difference. I throw many smiles and it is good to have them returned two fold. Try to enjoy your day my friend, we shall chat later.

Rick

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-02-09 07:40 AM

Reminds me of a relationship from days past...and when I thought she was gone for good I started giving things away she had left with me, and then she came back, and ask where these items were...James

Bobby Jordan
Member

since 2007-08-13

Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2008-02-09 08:37 AM

Passing shadows,

This is a good poem. I particularly like:
“a once love gone”
That’s a great little term.

Bobby

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2008-02-09 09:27 AM

Dixie~

*smiles* here -

Used-to-be's make for some interesting poetry~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2008-02-09 09:43 AM

thanks everyone

your comments always make me smile

I haven't gotten my heart broken lately but it seems he just won't go away...thick headed man I guess

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2008-02-09 11:56 AM

tossed out the window
crossed the inuendo
and the last burned bridge.....

Enjoyed reading your Words of poetry!

ARCTIC WIND

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2008-02-10 10:01 PM

"And I haven't loved you in quite a while."

oh Dixie
those thick headed men can drive you to distraction
but they make for great poems
and this is one...

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