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2islander2
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0 posted 2008-06-10 02:28 PM


Two pupils in class of mathematics:
Good appetite miss.
Jessica made a cake for apples,
apples of the paradise.
Julie prepared a chocolate cake,
some chocolate of heart.
They shared them,
they understood something
more important that the mathematics,
the happiness to offer.
Good appetite miss.

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OwlSA
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1 posted 2008-06-10 02:45 PM


What a beautiful way to learn Mathematics and for Mathematics to teach people to have a warm heart!

- Owl

Marchmadness
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2 posted 2008-06-10 04:47 PM


Mathmatics was never my best subject (I'm a word person) but I think I would enjoy this class.
                               Ida

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2008-06-10 09:28 PM


mmmm... Yann, I love chocolate!  a great write my friend...  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

2islander2
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4 posted 2008-06-11 02:21 AM


Hello Owl for your nice comment, in a lesson the mathematics represent only 10%, the other 90% are relationships....

  Have a nice day

    yann

2islander2
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5 posted 2008-06-11 02:22 AM


Hello Ida, thanks for your nice comment, Oh  I so would like to have you as a pupil...

  Huglets

   yann

2islander2
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6 posted 2008-06-11 02:23 AM


Hi Roniece, every year before Christmas, I offer chocolates to my pupils, they enjoy that a lot but alas it never corrupts them....

  have a nice day

  yann

OwlSA
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7 posted 2008-06-11 02:33 AM


Yes, Yann, I see that the lesson was 10% Mathematics and 90% relationships.  

If I was 600 years younger, I would love to have been a pupil in your class!  Yummy cake and chocolates - and an excellent and kind teacher!

- Owl

Prasad Nataraj
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8 posted 2008-06-11 04:27 AM


Hi Yann, that was some food for thought. Nice write. Prasad

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2008-06-11 02:15 PM


Now that's a math class that I could excel in! ~ and totally enjoy!

After eating such delicious treats, I would gain ~ 1 pound + 1 pound = 2 pounds!


Linda

2islander2
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10 posted 2008-06-11 02:22 PM


Thank You Linda, I felt so good smiling while reading your comment...I think you're very good at mathematics, I give you an A...

  Huglets

   yann

2islander2
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11 posted 2008-06-11 02:25 PM


Hello Owl, Don't worry, you don't need to be 600 years old younger, I'm "only"  50 years old.

Have a nice day and thank you for your very nice comment.

    yann
  

2islander2
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12 posted 2008-06-11 02:27 PM


Thank you Prasad for your nice comment, I'm glad you shared my poem.

   yann

OwlSA
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13 posted 2008-06-11 03:03 PM


Ah, but you see, Yann, I am 62, so that does make it very difficult for me to have been a pupil in your class without being 600 years younger!  Smiles.

- Owl

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