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Open Poetry #42

The Harmony of Cello's

xTr3m3sT
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0 posted 2008-06-10 11:46 AM

Listen to the cello's bellow in my sleep
while my hollow sorrow burns
in yesterday's tommorow.

Wallowing in despair
for the shadows don't care
about the pain that shoots
right there....there...

Listen, the strings of the cello
moves the mellow nature of
my fingers.

Please, see the light in my sight
for this fight is on bended knee
the trio of pain hurts me deeply
and I have nothing to gain.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

1 posted 2008-06-10 11:50 AM

Another good poem, I enjoy and appreciate with sharing your writings...

yann

xTr3m3sT
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2 posted 2008-06-10 11:51 AM

Thank you Yann :]]

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

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3 posted 2008-06-10 03:16 PM

a melancholic yet beautiful write...very nicely done

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

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Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2008-06-10 03:17 PM

I didn't notice the date and time that you posted I'm Human. However, I assume that this was written before I'm Human and so I am not too worried about your sadness in this poem. Nevertheless, I still say to you that you have plenty to gain. Listen to those mellow notes of the cello and see the light in your sight and often go on bended knee. Also read your poem, I'm Human over and over and over again and imbibe every syllable of it.

- Owl

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2008-06-10 06:30 PM

Nice writing...James

xTr3m3sT
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6 posted 2008-06-10 06:34 PM

Thank you all =D

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