Night Dancers (Poetry Workshop - M, W & T's)

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Open Poetry #42

Night Dancers (Poetry Workshop - M, W & T's)

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2008-06-06 11:29 AM

Night Dancers

Darkness churns; it stirs the shifting light.
Carnal longing grows in deepest night.
Sparks infernos, deep desires engage;
embers soar while needs inspire, enrage.

Lovers, flirt and touch with sensuous need;
hunger seeks the pleasure, urges feed.
Waltz in gauzy clouds that almost curtain,
move with grace, the dancing bodies certain.

Midnight climax reaches upper latitudes,
filling nights once laced with empty platitudes.

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Alison

K-K
Member

since 2008-03-13

Posts 153
Indiana

1 posted 2008-06-06 11:50 AM

You are remarkably talented. I enjoy reading your work. Keep em comin!!!

Ray Sharpe
Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 112
Tenerife

2 posted 2008-06-06 12:19 PM

Glorious mix of words and feelings Alison ....loved it

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2008-06-06 12:32 PM

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2008-06-07 10:42 PM

K-K,

Thank you for such a wonderful message. I will do my best. You are a delight!

A
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Ray,

Thank you so much.

Alison
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Love you, Dixie-girl

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2008-06-08 10:03 PM

Very cool poem~
I especially liked the subtle mix of contrasts I read in to this.

Nice write all the way around!!!

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

6 posted 2008-06-08 10:28 PM

Yes Alison my dear, you told it well

I got a bug in my commputer a couple of weeks ago and lost my address book so if you would like to send me another email I would appreciate it

Love Lindsay

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2008-06-09 06:40 AM

very enjoyable to read, beautiful images...

Have a nice day

yann

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

8 posted 2008-06-09 08:10 AM

Ali-girl... I do so love this...

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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