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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Summer Morning And the air is cool A breeze rustles The leaves above our heads What else is there needed To be said We sit here quietly At the end of our lives Watching small waves Rippling along the shore The young squirrels Scurrying around In their search for food Those days We never Together had Two sparrows Dusting themselves Beside the road . [This message has been edited by Huan Yi (06-03-2008 12:25 PM).] |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
both very philosophical and poetic, enjoyed it. yann |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
it is descriptive yet goes beyond description clever talks delay friendship! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Achingly beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
There is much heartfelt emotion and yet, resignation in this. Lovely blend of the two. Ida |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
Beautiful and sad and makes one wonder what could have been. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
John, This sad poem works very well. Bobby |
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