Open Poetry #42 |
Angelo's Revenge |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Drunked-up Sally and Felix have just given Angelo a beating. They took turns beating on the kid. Angelo’s out for revenge. He waits until Sally and Felix have fallen asleep. He knows where Felix keeps the car keys. He takes the keys and goes down and starts the family car. He drives it a few blocks away. It’s dark, and no one sees him. Angelo returns the keys of the car. Next morning, Felix wakes up to go to work. He can’t find the car. He thinks it’s probably been hot wired, and stolen. Felix alerts the police. They find the car in good condition, nothing wrong with it. The police are angry, and give Felix a lecture about forgetting where he parked the car. Angelo sits and laughs inwardly. Bobby |
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Ray Sharpe Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 112Tenerife |
wow ..you have done it again ...I love reading about Angelo...though being new i do not know his history it sounds to me a little close to the truth |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
LOL this was pure gold. I love this one cause' this is something I would do. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Ray, Yes, Angelo's always doing the bad stuff. Well, not always. People should treat Angelo better. Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (06-02-2008 09:41 PM).] |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Angel, Don't try it. You might get caught, and then you'd blame me. Bobby |
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Ray Sharpe Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 112Tenerife |
Yes bobby they should treat him better ...no child deserves to be beaten... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Ray, I'm Felix, remember? Angelo is now a math professor, he survived his beatings well. He’s also a tough cookie. Bobby |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Good for Angelo. i really, really like him. Joyce |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Joyce, Angelo likes you right back with a big hug. Love Bobby |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
I can't help wondering what (angelic) Angelo did to deserve such a beating! Again, a very good read with real life situations---both meaningful and entertaining. Art |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
At least Angelo got even with a fairly harmless prank. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Art, I'm pleased the story worked for you. As with many incidents of an embarrassing nature, Angelo doesn't want to talk about it. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, Yes, Angelo always cuts Sally and Felix some slack. He's good that way. Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Enjoyable to read. yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, I'm very happy you enjoyed the story. Bobby |
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