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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2008-06-02 08:34 PM


Drunked-up Sally and Felix
have just given Angelo
a beating.  

They took turns
beating on the kid.  

Angelo’s out for revenge.  

He waits until Sally and Felix
have fallen asleep.  

He knows where Felix
keeps the car keys.  

He takes the keys and goes down
and starts the family car.  

He drives it
a few blocks away.  

It’s dark,
and no one sees him.  

Angelo returns
the keys of the car.  

Next morning,
Felix wakes up
to go to work.  

He can’t find the car.  

He thinks it’s probably
been hot wired, and stolen.  

Felix alerts the police.  

They find the car
in good condition,
nothing wrong with it.  

The police are angry,
and give Felix a lecture
about forgetting where
he parked the car.  

Angelo sits
and laughs inwardly.  

Bobby

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Ray Sharpe
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1 posted 2008-06-02 08:44 PM


wow ..you have done it again ...I love reading about Angelo...though being new i do not know his history it sounds to me a little close to the truth
xTr3m3sT
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2 posted 2008-06-02 08:47 PM


LOL this was pure gold. I love this one cause' this is something I would do.
Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2008-06-02 09:03 PM


Thanks Ray,

Yes, Angelo's always doing the bad stuff.  Well, not always.  People should treat Angelo better.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (06-02-2008 09:41 PM).]

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2008-06-02 09:05 PM


Yo Angel,

Don't try it.  You might get caught, and then you'd blame me.

Bobby

Ray Sharpe
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5 posted 2008-06-02 09:31 PM


Yes bobby they should treat him better ...no child deserves to be beaten...
Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-06-02 10:03 PM


Yo Ray,

I'm Felix, remember?  Angelo is now a math professor, he survived his beatings well.  He’s also a tough cookie.

Bobby

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7 posted 2008-06-02 10:54 PM


Good for Angelo.  i really, really like him.  Joyce
Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2008-06-03 07:36 AM


Thanks dear Joyce,

Angelo likes you right back with a big hug.

Love Bobby

gilead
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9 posted 2008-06-03 12:35 PM


I can't help wondering what (angelic) Angelo did to deserve such a beating! Again, a very good read with real life situations---both meaningful and entertaining.

Art

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10 posted 2008-06-03 12:58 PM


At least Angelo got even with a fairly harmless prank.
                                    Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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11 posted 2008-06-03 01:12 PM


Thanks Art,

I'm pleased the story worked for you.  As with many incidents of an embarrassing nature, Angelo doesn't want to talk about it.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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12 posted 2008-06-03 01:13 PM


Thanks dear Ida,

Yes, Angelo always cuts Sally and Felix some slack.  He's good that way.

Bobby

2islander2
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13 posted 2008-06-03 04:46 PM


Enjoyable to read.

   yann

Robert E. Jordan
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14 posted 2008-06-03 05:13 PM


Thanks Yann,

I'm very happy you enjoyed the story.

Bobby

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