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Discussion With Sundown
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Discussion With Sundown |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Discussion With Sundown Oh mighty cloak, Dropped slowly from the shoulder of promise Do you cloud the horizon with vague ambiguity? Are shadows merely opaque thoughts, concealing naked truths? The sun was once a virgin Glittering on the hand of time Are my feelings caped in widespread arms of vanity? Or does he hold my essence to the sky, Dancing as I do at sundown Awaiting eagerly the fragrant rain Copyright Kkh 5/31/08 |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very profound thoughts, Kathleen. Ida |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"The sun was once a virgin Glittering on the hand of time" Oh I wish that line was mine! A stunning image, and you do manage to dig deep without sharp implements.  Still a fan, I am!  |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
<~ nods head in agreement with Ms. Blaze. That line won me. Slam bang gorgeous. ~Heather |
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