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Ray Sharpe
Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 112
Tenerife

0 posted 2008-05-31 06:31 AM

Mum died 18 months ago......it feels like yesterday!This one I wrote as a song....

As you lay there in your final disguise…..I know you have heard when I talk to your eyes

I feel my heart break when you take to the sky……my world falls apart … my soul starts to cry

I don’t want ..to feel this way….I don’t want to be here today

I just want… to hear you say…come here baby….I’ll take you away

Here….I……go

Here……I …go

Come here baby..I´ll take you away…  along the road where you’ll want to stay
Come here baby I’ll hold your hand …make it right….. help you to stand

Here …I…..go

Here ….I …..go

Here they come now to turn off the light……empty the world..  deprive us of sight
Here they come now to take you away…..strike us dumb……leave nothing to say

I’d follow you…  if only I might…….tear down the walls..give heaven a fight

To hear you say …just one more time ….come here baby I’ll help you stand

Here …I…..go

Here… I ….go

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2008-05-31 06:40 AM

Nice and Poignant write, I'm sure your mother whereever she is cares about you,
keep on writing

yann

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2008-05-31 09:00 AM

Ray, I lost my mother 28 years ago and it still seems like yesterday at times

I love this song of yours!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2008-05-31 01:28 PM

Ray, the last thing I imagine that you were expecting to hear is that I envy you so much - you and Passing Shadows. However, that doesn't mean that my heart isn't torn apart for your pain. I wish you strength, courage and the ability to allow beautiful memories make you smile, even if only a little.

- Owl

Ray Sharpe
Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 112
Tenerife

4 posted 2008-05-31 09:47 PM

you are all so kind but owl your pain sears into me ...I am new here so forgive me if you have explained this before ...but I understand from your message that maybe you didn´t know your mum?.....so sad indeed;I am sure ...and I say this from a non religious stance....that your mother thinks / thought about you every day!
love to you all....Ray

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

5 posted 2008-06-01 02:01 AM

Thank you Ray for your concern. No, I knew my mom all right. I knew her only too well.

- Owl

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