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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-05-30 05:42 AM


there are expressions in your eyes
that don't have handle words
like drapes on an open window
unpredictable in high heals

I guess the smoke is an excuse
to read the mind pages
too thick of a book for one study
but you said you enjoyed duration

and you only look up part of the time
when it is lady like to do so
lest you catch my eyes there
trying to put the music on

that makes you crave a tall dance
where your chin fits lifting upward
if only for a sky full of night
and the warm of hands on your waist

not the knowing kind, but the friendly
_______________

daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (05-30-2008 06:29 AM).]

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-05-30 06:13 AM


smiles... Mr Daark... you sure do know how to write the lovely of lovely... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-05-30 06:30 AM


ms r&b, thank you for looking up from there..
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3 posted 2008-05-30 11:01 AM


D

Nothing like a good poem, a good coffee and a good morning sun to make me smile as I start my day.

A

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-05-30 12:54 PM


ms ali-san, thanks babe for the peek in
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5 posted 2008-05-30 03:25 PM


Friendly is always good.

But so is knowing.



Enjoyed, m'friend.

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-05-30 03:33 PM


ms sun, thanks babe!!
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7 posted 2008-06-06 10:30 PM


D

Returning because this is just so beautiful.

A

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