Open Poetry #42 |
(First Attempt) Raining Day |
Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Raining Day Sitting besides the window pane, Gazing at the dark blue sky, The chill breeze passed me by, Touching my vein. I could feel the cool air, Blown over my hands bare, I could sense it’s about to rain, Sitting besides the window pain. Heard a roar from the sky, It was lightening and thundering, I wondered why? The bag of cloud was cut open wide, And water was rushing out like a tide. Kids running up and down the streets, Water overflowing up to their feet, Men coming home with sweets, Ladies preparing spicy treats. How wonderful is the rain, Washing away all my pain, How wonderful is the rain, Which I saw, sitting besides the window pane. "Hardwork pays in the long run" [This message has been edited by Prasad Nataraj (05-31-2008 06:12 AM).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Rainy days always seem to always bring the sadness .... enjoyed! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you for sharing your window pane. I loved the visuals that you painted for us. Some of us are working in the poetry workshop - it might be a place you want to check out as you just have started to write poems. It's nice to read your poems on the boards and welcome to PiP. Alison |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Thank you Romantic Heart and Alison, for your comments, surely I will try to participate in the workshop as and when I get time. This is my first attempt at poetry. Nice to hear you enjoyed it. Prasad |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Prasad... I enjoyed your work here... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi RDB, thanks for your comment, I am glad you liked my first attempt. Prasad "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love also your first attempt, dear Prasad. I enjoyed your ponderings and your conclusions about the rain. I love rain too. You succeeded in creating a peaceful, serene atmosphere, that is what I perceived. Beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Thanks for your wonderful comments Margherita, and I am glad you liked my poem “Raining Day”. |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
I enjoyed this simple but very effective piece... |
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Ray Sharpe Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 112Tenerife |
I love this one especially...............Kids running up and down the streets, Water overflowing up to their feet, Men coming home with sweets, Ladies preparing spicy treats. It conjurs up a lovely picture of your home land |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Thanks Ray, I am glad, you liked my poem. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your thoughts...James |
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