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xTr3m3sT
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0 posted 2008-05-29 04:42 PM


The shadow of yesterday's pain
foreshadows today's suffering.

Anguish whips around my legs
keeping me from walking.

I'm standing, waiting,
for the electric shocks of torment
to infect my DNA.

The manifestation of the pain
inside my body
resembles a lighting storm
with clouds of deep darkness
and ligntning bolts of blood.

The cold hand of death
tickles my flesh
constantly sending that icy sensation
up and down my spine.

Then the lightning bolt of blood
finally connects to my being
and my soul bleeds
the honesty, and the will
to live.


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1 posted 2008-05-31 04:08 AM


Always keep writing - times can be so hard.

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2islander2
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2 posted 2008-05-31 04:15 AM


Very touching, thank you for sharing,

   yann

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