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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2008-02-07 06:52 PM

I will keep this love forever,
and always,
I will keep my right words,
Let the night keep growing
Into light,
Let this love grow long,
Let this light be here,
Tonight,
Feeling the right
of my beating heart,
This love feels the same
Without your love tonight,
Love still stays here,
This love keeps us alive,
This love stays
Whether if it's right or wrong,
This love is strong,
Enough to light up my life
This love will never end,
This love will grow into light,
Bring the dawn to morning light
The showers of rain,
After the rain leaves the sunshine
And so this love
This love is ours forever,
This love will stay forever and ever
This love...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2008-02-07 07:01 PM

vandana, your loving, poetic heart loves passionately and deeply!

May Love be your constant companion in life!

EA

Bobby Jordan
Member

since 2007-08-13

Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-02-07 08:16 PM

Vandana,

There's loads of love in this love poem. I like it very much. Keep up the good work.

Bobby

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-02-08 04:33 AM

Enjoyed...James

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

4 posted 2008-02-08 05:19 AM

Vandana,

Not too far from where I'm sitting now and a lifetime ago, 4 guys from Liverpool sang " All You Need Is Love" you reinforced that message with this..what more can I say except..FAB !!

John

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2008-02-08 09:00 AM

Very nicely done, Lady Vandana.
Both your English vocabulary and sentence structure have come a long way since we first met.
I truly enjoy reading your love poetry, and encourage you to keep that pen busy.

Midnitesun, Kacy

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

6 posted 2008-02-08 09:05 AM

"Let the night keep growing
Into light,
Let this love grow long"

beautiful!

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