Open Poetry #42 |
daydreaming |
Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
daydreaming her backyard salt marsh sunlight flecks the blue heron daydreaming all day |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, dear Marti, this is wonderful. I would gladly spend the day dreaming like this majestic blue Heron ... but with my feet in the air. Gorgeous! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
BEAUTIFUL! Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Loved the mood of the poem and the photo. At first glance, I thought it was our (South African) Black-headed heron until I noticed the differences. - Owl |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I really like this. What an amazing bird - she wears your haiku well. Alison |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Thank you all for your lovely comments. Seems the only poetry I'm able to pen of late is haiku's, so I try really hard to put a lot into them! And it also seems I posted this twice. Oh, well! hugs, Marti |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marti, your haiku's are better than my nothings. and the photo is lovely! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is beautiful Marti.. Your words plus the pic..excellent. Hugs~Nancy |
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