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Fog (haiku)
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Fog (haiku) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * Fog licks valley's skin blindness threatens the Earth's eyes peaks blush in sun's kiss * |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Lovely Margherita!  ARCTIC WIND |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I am especially fond of the closing line (and image)! applause! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Fog licks valley's skin blindness threatens the Earth's eyes peaks blush in sun's kiss"  ~ Each line beared repeating! Oh, the supreme majesty of Nature! Sighing here, Linda  |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Made me blush too! : ) Nice Ct |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Margherita, This makes excellent use of the classic haiku form--very good work. Bobby |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Words of beauty in a true art form. Joyce |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous piece and picture I love this! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Margherita Such beauty in words and photo. And in poet too. A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your replies are so very kind, my dear Poet friends! Thank you! love Margherita  |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Margherita, Amazing picture & the words are even better, one day you must teach me Haiku .. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
thank you effjayel ... it is fascinating to "pack" some meaning into just a few words. love Margherita |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely, Margherita - words and picture. Hugs Helen |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
each line is a poem in itself Margherita beautifully done |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Very much enjoyed Charisma |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
it lifts the fog of discontent. i wish you a equally, if not more yielding pen in future. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Helen, thank you Kate, thank you: Charisma, thank you:  Poddar, thank you:  Margherita |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
I love haiku's and you write them so well! This is so beautiful! hugs,Marti |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Yes Margherita it is beautiful, both words and picture. well done. Lindsay |
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Fareed Member
since 2008-02-08
Posts 75 |
Aesthetic! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
very well done . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Marti, thank you  Lindsay, thank you  Fareed, thank you icebox, thank you |
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