Beauty Concealed In Mechanics

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Open Poetry #42

Beauty Concealed In Mechanics

Ri
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since 2008-02-01

Posts 67
Blackburn, England

0 posted 2008-05-25 03:57 PM

I stare into the abyss,
of the fluidity showing my reflection,
Feeling nothing but the cruel wind against my face,
yet nothing lasts forever, and forever is nothing.
I am deserted but for my own image,
staring straight back at me, unmoving, unforgiving.
The water beckons me to come closer,
to distort my only companion,
to feel the icy grip of death.
I realise how quiet it is,
with no mechanical faces directed at me.
My isolation is short-lived,
as I watch a soaring creature,
swoop from Heaven to take life.
Unmoving, unforgiving, like nature itself.
Yet it isn’t respected, isn’t noticed,
like the pathetic life of anybody who tries to be somebody.
All that is fair must fade, and all that are loved must diminish.

I stare into the abyss,
of the fluidity that shows my reflection,
waiting for my saviour to swoop down from heaven,
yet they could presently walk this land,
unknown, unloved, seeking the very same joys.
For we are placed on this world,
with so little seen and so much done.
The most beautiful things remain unknown, unloved.
I am not alone, but in public solitude.
Faces don’t disguise their pity;
mechanical smiles don’t disguise their revulsion.
They must think it odd,
to find someone alone, but for this scene.
Unnatural.
Yet this is where I love to go;
It is the most natural part of life that I know.
Alone I admire the solitary beauty
But for the many mechanical mouths ‘merry’

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2008-05-25 04:42 PM

This is deep ~ and multi-layered. It deserves a second read for me to have a better understanding of the "solitary beauty" of your words.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-05-26 08:12 PM

"All that is fair must fade, and all that are loved must diminish."

Interesting...interesting thought...excellent write

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