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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2008-05-25 01:02 PM

(Last story until another time and another place)

Freedom!

She laughed out loud within the feel
of wit long since been dead
for she knew of freedom soon to be
and of a yearning soon to leave
the level of her consciousness
not yet stabilized.

She didn’t twirl or dance
as one released from jail
because time echoes down the line
the feel of minds combined
but to the side tenderly
now lie the scripted lines
of what long ago transpired.

There’s freedom in the knowing
of visitation rights
when fortified to be
not undone by feel
and freedom in the knowledge
she can love and yet still live
outside the lines
one day writ and read.

Freedom from the ties
of a knowing deep inside
leaves a woman, me,
excited to be free
for in freedom there is more
than ever thought before.

And then after the “now”
what story can be told
by a consciousness left shallow
for the sake of living free?

Helen / 25 May 2008

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

1 posted 2008-05-25 02:49 PM

I thought this was a very nice write.

Hugs Kimberly

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2008-05-25 03:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kimberly.

Helen

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

3 posted 2008-06-15 05:22 PM

Dear Helen, this was beautiful, but where have you been? You have me concerned. Please post, or write me and let us know how you are doing.

Blessings to you.

Love, Rich

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-06-15 06:06 PM

quote:
Freedom from the ties
of a knowing deep inside
leaves a woman, me,
excited to be free
for in freedom there is more
than ever thought before.

Your freedom is a vast experience that I hope you will share with us, dear Helen!
I am glad Richie brought this back, but I too wonder about that first line above ??

Until soon I hope. Maybe you have moved?

Let us know.
Sending you much love.
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2008-06-15 06:35 PM

"Freedom from the ties
of a knowing deep inside
leaves a woman, me,
excited to be free
for in freedom there is more
than ever thought before."

~ "Freedom" is such a liberating "F" word!

Fly free! Fly high in a cerulean sky!

Much love to you!

Linda

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

6 posted 2008-06-16 08:38 AM

Thank you all so much for your kind replies. Yes, I have moved house and am still waiting for internet access. I anticipate a long wait but, as they say in the classics, I'll be back. The blue pages are my salvation! I'm so sad, however, to not be able to read to my heart's content but I've learnt the merits of patience which, by the way, is an extremely hard lesson to learn.

Love to you all.
Helen

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