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gata run momentary |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it is ironic how time and forgetful melds moments and makes me look out a window just in time to see you smiling I wondered did you wonder about the absent of my mind when my pen seemed lost in wing and you didn't feel my eyes but then you were warm now in our accidental accounting and you made promises again perhaps I will know them on a first name whisper wind when you let the gata run along her momentary glide searching for something new from the ancient of tomorrow _____________ daark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Indeed! The moment holds everything and you said it just so masterfully. Love also how you render the synchronicity! Outstanding with a beautiful soft touch to it. Love, Margherita  |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D Sometimes there is an underlying almost sadness in your poetry. It seems to peek out from wonderful images and expression. I don't know. Maybe it's just me. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend _________________ ms ali-san..when laughter is not there, sadness does not always take it's place...sometimes just thought..thanks babe |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
mmmm....such beauty written here Mr Daark... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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