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BugBuggy Member
since 2005-12-19
Posts 130michigan |
As I look at you and our eyes meet I feel passion I have never known I feel a weakness begin in me as your eyes sweep down my body I am aching to have you know I am melting from their heat how I long to have you see the weakness the longing which grows in me BugBuggy |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like the naked warmth in this one. You don't overdecorate it, it's simply right there. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
perfect hesitation...enjoyed it |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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BugBuggy Member
since 2005-12-19
Posts 130michigan |
thank you both so very much BugBuggy |
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BugBuggy Member
since 2005-12-19
Posts 130michigan |
thank you too arctic wind I so appreciate feedback from you all BugBuggy |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yeppers! The "eyes" (ayes) have it! lol Felt the heat in this one!   EA |
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shakalakaboomboom Junior Member
since 2008-05-19
Posts 44V.A, U.S.A |
aww that was soo shweet!<3 ~Savana<3 |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Bug Bubby, I really don't know what is the most precious in love, the thoughts, the eyes, the physical etc , it must depends of everyone and every moment, Your poem is warm and lovely and I enjoyed reading it thanks yann |
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BugBuggy Member
since 2005-12-19
Posts 130michigan |
thanks bunch everyone BugBuggy |
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