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BugBuggy
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michigan

0 posted 2008-05-25 12:09 PM



As I look at you
and our eyes meet
I feel passion I have never known
I feel a weakness begin in me
as your eyes sweep down my body
I am aching to have you know
I am melting from their heat
how I long to have you see
the weakness
the longing which grows in me

BugBuggy

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Pilgrimage
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1 posted 2008-05-25 03:11 AM


I like the naked warmth in this one.  You don't overdecorate it, it's simply right there.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-05-25 06:51 AM


perfect hesitation...enjoyed it
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-05-25 10:55 AM


Enjoyed the Write!

ARCTIC WIND

BugBuggy
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michigan
4 posted 2008-05-25 10:55 AM


thank you both so very much

BugBuggy

BugBuggy
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5 posted 2008-05-25 10:56 AM


thank you too arctic wind I so appreciate feedback from you all

BugBuggy

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2008-05-25 11:01 AM


Yeppers! The "eyes" (ayes) have it! lol

Felt the heat in this one!


EA

shakalakaboomboom
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since 2008-05-19
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7 posted 2008-05-25 11:24 AM


aww that was soo shweet!<3

                      ~Savana<3

2islander2
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8 posted 2008-05-25 11:32 AM


Hello Bug Bubby, I really don't know what is the most precious in love, the thoughts, the  eyes, the physical etc , it must depends of everyone and every moment,

Your poem is warm and lovely and I enjoyed reading it
   thanks

    yann

BugBuggy
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9 posted 2008-05-25 11:34 AM


thanks bunch everyone

BugBuggy

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