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A Day…In The Life Of (K's challenge)
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A Day…In The Life Of (K's challenge) |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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A Day…In The Life Of today didn’t look like rain but puddles found the ground and muddy water still has a reflection I am living a hurry up and wait life frustrated about the things I can not change running hard and fast in the race in place extraordinary dreams spill openly from ordinary sleep even there I want the truth it is more for me a need it is not so much I am unhappy with myself more of the choices made puddles found the ground didn’t look like rain today "no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very intense and beautiful, dear Helen! Love, Margherita |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I love this - but then I alwsys do love your poetry. I especially love the reflection of the beginning at the end. - Owl |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Helen, the eternal confessional . . . Let up on yourself girl . |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Argh! What poeticnosity! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"even there I want the truth" Especially there! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
everywhere we want the truth  (yer lovely) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Helen so often it doesn't look like rain and then... this is perfect |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
"extraordinary dreams spill openly from ordinary sleep" So true when one has a need for truth. Ida |
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