Open Poetry #42 |
Graduation '08 |
The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
"Graduation ‘08" 1 Michael- My friend My confidant My brother Four Years Have Past In our French-bred friendship Four years Of laughter Of smiles And of tears Four years Of angst And four years Of joy But more importantly Four years I’ll never, Ever forget 2 Come June the 6th- When we stride Side by side, I’ll gladly surrender Myself- To the Pomp and Circumstance Of Commencement Knowing you’re there, Just like freshman year, To stand by my side A true friend At heart Closing this chapter in our young, small town lives- while sporting Polyester Blue Gowns And constricting caps Dreaming and Proclaiming What our futures hold |
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lost-in-a-mind-of-dreams Junior Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 35 |
very sweet i like it! *****dreamer***** |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
To be able to have such a wonderful and enduring friendship ~ says a great deal about you as a person ~ and as a friend, yourself! May your graduation day be yet another positive step in your life journey! Dare to dream! ~ and work towards achieving them! This is an exciting time in your life! ~ Growth, exploration, adventure, maturing, attaining, learning, accomplishing... Enjoy! Have fun! ~ and continue to be your sweet self. btw, this would make for one fine graduation gift for your Michael! May you continue to be friends for a lifetime! Here is a big congratulatory hug for each of you! Linda |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
that is a wonderful thing to have that great of a friendship, good poem i really enjoyed it. JJ |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Thanks guys, I appreciate your warm replies. And you're right it is great to have friends (like Michael) in your life to brighten your day. I'm glad you enjoyed my trite attempt to express my pre-graduation emotions. oh, and la terre de ange I'll think about presenting my little piece to Mikey. Humbly, Jillian JNS |
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Clang Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222 |
Congrats!!!!! |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Merci Beaucoup Clang. ~Jill JNS |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
enjoyed -- just nice to read about good people in good places -- congrats |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Too true steavenr. Oh and Thanks. ~Jill JNS "I celebrate myself, and sing myself, And what I assume you shall assume, For every atom belonging to me as good belongs to you."-WW |
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